Wow.. i have goosebumps.. this poem is beyond amazing.. no joke its FRIGGEN AWEEESSSSSOOOOMEEEEE!!!! perfect.. great story .. great emotion great word choice.. ive never read a poem like this.. its soo clever.. and creative.. and perfect.. oh my gosh.. i cant even tell you like i LOVE THIS POEM!!! its amazinG!

I have never read anything like this before...mmm so creative and..just....wow!

we fought a long battle; with cuts and scars in mind

this line for some odd reason stuck out the most to me...it just shows the raw emotion of this poem. Lovely! 5/5

This is great. the wordings is perfect and the set out on how it all went by is amazing!

5/5 cause it trully is excellent.

David

WOW!! that was amazing. i really like this poem. i havent ever read any like it. and i think that it was so creative. great job. !!!

This was a very interesting poem...i havent read anything about angels trying to control...very creative..the flow seemed a bit off to me, but it didnt affect the poem too much and the rhyming was very nice..awesome job:)

Its good, it flows rather well, and it's almost as if you can see all of this happening as you say it, good job 5/5

"It's such a pity that a creature so beautiful
had to meet its end this way" You speak so eloquently in this poem. The wording is powerful and the message is clear and strong. Excellent job!

~jas~

I love this poem... I can see why you would consider it one of your best. It's not just a poem or feelings. It's a mini story. Great read!! 5/5

marcella

Brilliant!!!
From the first line of this poem it had me wanting more, sitting eagerly waiting to know what happens. Your writing has so much emotion in it, i love it!!
5/5

Such a great poem i was hooked from the first you put so muc emotion into your writing