Broken

by RainbowDemon RogueDoll   Jan 30, 2006


And with a broken mind
bitter tears flow down his face
water runs into the basin
his tears soak the tiled floor
he looks around him in all his misery
he spots the open vanity and sees the bottles of pills
with a new found release he swallows pill after pill
overcome with dizziness
his angular body races towards the ground
impact...
but he feels no pain...
only peace...

kk pplz this is the second part to the poem \\\"fading\\\" itz not as good but yer lolz... plz vote and comment!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Roxy

    Wow deeply pasional
    amazing
    xoxroxyxox
    this one was one of the best lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Jennifer

    Thats good. i like it. thanks for the comment 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by CynicallyObsessive

    Awesome poem.

    5/5

    thanks for commenting my poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    3 words = sounds like me.

  • 18 years ago

    by cherish

    I gave u a 5 cause i think it is just brilliant..its short but has so much meaning a power in ur words..
    i loved it

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