This is very well written and expresses a very true concept.

5/5

That is what life is all about, isn't it? this could go on and be an endless poem. good work!
shobhana

Great poem, You portraid the true factor of life. Very well written. I loved it. Looking forward to read more of your poems. 5/5

Thank you so much for commenting on mine.

Hey bharti
wikd poem..ill read more of your poems there amazing..

This is ver true..and the poem was really good...I liked it, it's different...

::MELI::

Yeap thats life , though no one can really define life , but yes can feel it .
very well written.

Wow i think we all can so relate to that.....i guess that is life....... i like how u wrote this its mavellous..5/5
great wrk.

sonam

Something wrong with my fav column yaar, i wonder how i forgot to comment on ur so many latest poems, i never received any alert at all.

this is just so sweet poem

Sometimes lovely, frightening and dull
sad at the cruelities of the world
sometimes joy undescribed.
To me this is life.......

loved it
sorry for being so late
5/5