I like the way you have experimented with varying stanzas and rhymes. what you say is so true - so many people hold back emotions simply because they think they can't display them.

good work Nithin

take care
Shobhana

Hi Nitin

this was awesome. u have written it so beautifully. u hav written the emotions in ur words. its one of my fav poems from ur side.

excellent!!!!!5/5

take care
Bharti

Great poem i loved it your a wonderful writer!!!!!!!

Briliant poem Nitin!!! I loved every single line. Wonderfully described, as you read it, you can actually see the picture right in front of your eyes. Great job as always.

Love
Michelle

Wow... itna dard patha nahi kidhar se lathe ho... but anyways... it's good.. too good for words..
keep writing...5/5

Much Love,
Ipsita

That is so sad! I think boys should cry, even if it is in secret. I can't believe how this guy can be so strong through so much pain. great poem,
sammi

Hey hun,
another fantastic poem. guys and everyone else should cry, its healthy. Guys think its a weeak sign to cry... but it shows strength in my opinion. When a man cries it shows hes not afraid to show ppl how he truly feels, and its not good to keep things buried inside.. well great job. 5/5
Monique

This is really good, it's sad how we have so many double standards in this society. What you have written is very heartfelt and your emotions are completely tangible. Nice job :)

Well im was quite speechless wen i read this poem , its so powerful , portrays such strong emotions n realities of life.
Hatts off , awsome poem Nitin !

That was so emotional, although im a girl i can partly relate! This poem was amazing, keep writing your poems are incredible!

Nithin,

thanks a ton for your sweet comments! i truly feel appreciated!
thanks a real ton - u keep writing!
there's a lot of talent in your work!!

love and luck
shobhana

Hey this is really good but just becuz a boy is a boy they have a right to cry although it may be a bit feminine lol :D but any ways thanks for the comment and maybe i will but hes been treating me better lately lol thanks -Amirah

I miss ur poems and u nitin! so sorry i havent been around.
This had tears in my eyes, and i hope you know that it is ok for boys to cry, yet i do see the strength in this masterpeice of writing.
Take care,
Much love
>torn -x.x.x-

Ohhh so sad =( The worst part is, there really are people out here who have gone through such pain... my heart goes out to them... and I hope that you are not one of them. Fantastic writing, keep up the great work. xoxo

I knew a little boy, like that before, but when he turned 14, he killed himslef, it changed my world when he did that.. he only had me and his other friends..

This was such a sad but beautiful write. So much pain within the words. A lovely poem indeed, well done!

Warmest regards,

Steve

I love this poem.....It's amazing work

Boy's don't cry.... they keep the drop's in there ey's but as there about 2 fall they wipe them off.....great poem... and very true

That was so beautiful and sad. 5/5 you really express the pain very well.
Luv Helen xxx

Oh my gosh. i am actually breathless. thats amazing, im definetaly gonna check out more of your work. its an amazing story and it saddens me to think that people actually do go through that and its amazing how they can stay so strong. amazing