Oh my gosh. i am actually breathless. thats amazing, im definetaly gonna check out more of your work. its an amazing story and it saddens me to think that people actually do go through that and its amazing how they can stay so strong. amazing

I loved how you told a story that was original, the last line that you used was a really good way to end the peom too

As all of your poem's this is a fantatic piece of work, I love reading your poems, keep writing so I can keep reading take care sarah x

Nitin
This is one of the saddest poems I have read. You can feel the heartache and abandonment in this boy's heart. You can feel the tears of his soul. Excellent job on this write.

now its his turn as he feels so alone
for the ones he need are all gone
but no matter how he decide to die

These lines felt like they were written for me.
Take Care Cindy