Watch me burn

by Watchmeburn   Jan 30, 2006


Come I invited you,
Dont be rude again,
Come,come watch me burn,
Watch me ignite, my friend.

Don't pass up this opportunity,
Ill breathe my ash in your face,
Inhale it, breathe it in,
I want you to know your my disgrace.

You love me I love you to,
What went wrong and where,
This distant passion between us,
Will end in thick flares.

Don't think Ill forget,
When you left me at shore,
You drove right away,
I hope your heart is sore.

Ill stitch my own lips,
I wont tell of your secret,
Have my f**king trust,
I dont care if you keep it.

Mother you knew,
when stoned, you made me see,
You and your clients,
Tearing right through me.

Well this is the end,
You say you are sorry now,
Well get rid of all those men,
I might forgive somehow.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight

    Great Poem! I like the part "Ill breathe my ash in your face." Sorry i never replied....i havnt been on this site in ages but i just read through most of your poetry and love them!

  • 18 years ago

    by aliiiii

    I like the way you expressed this. I'm so very sorry of what you go through. I have had my bad times with my dad, people and gender can differ, but it still holds the same pain, so I'm very happy you write about it. 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Wow that was a very passionate peice. Very descriptive and some great imagery. Awesome!

  • 18 years ago

    by Forsaken Redeemer

    Hey, this is an amazingly powerful and emotional poem. i really liked the opening verse,

    Come I invited you,
    Dont be rude again,
    Come,come watch me burn,
    Watch me ignite, my friend

    and this bit,

    Ill stitch my own lips,
    I wont tell of your secret,
    Have my f**king trust,
    I dont care if you keep it.

    great work, keep going, you're obviously extremely talented.

    Forsaken Redeemer
    xXx

    p.s. thanks for all your comments, they mean loads :0)

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