by Michael D Nalley Jan 30, 2006
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Love and hate |
Short and to the point....and I liked the oppisites used.....and was written so a person like me could read it and get it. good job. |
by Loulou
Great poem like always great job!!!!!!!! |
by HJ
I agree with both comments, for sure. But I cannot feel when reading that its not really how it appears, so many unanswered uncertainies. On the surface a very poetic and cute read, but the fact that I have come to know you a little, the message it shouts out to me is something quite different, insecure and very ambigioius. |
by Melissa
Wow, beautifully written! With only a few words, you delivered a wonderful message! Awesome poem! |