Wow, beautifully written! With only a few words, you delivered a wonderful message! Awesome poem!

I agree with both comments, for sure. But I cannot feel when reading that its not really how it appears, so many unanswered uncertainies. On the surface a very poetic and cute read, but the fact that I have come to know you a little, the message it shouts out to me is something quite different, insecure and very ambigioius.
Enjoyable and very very thought provoking.

Your friend
Hayley

Great poem like always great job!!!!!!!!

love always
tabby

Short and to the point....and I liked the oppisites used.....and was written so a person like me could read it and get it. good job.

~Retniapdoolb~