Comments : The Mouse

  • 18 years ago

    by melly xx

    The poems alright i guess
    i didnt understand not one word
    i think you should explain what the words mean so it makes a little bit more sense

  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    ^That's what a dictionary is for (lol).

    It's kind of a cool idea for a poem, must have taken a fair amount of effort. I know that I would have a hard time using all those words properly. Very nice.
    ~Jaime

  • 18 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    For being impulsive, it was wonderful! keep writing, and stay safe, strong, and healthy!