In life,there is never a road that ends...There is also a divertion or two,which you can take and try doing things you wanted or try changing things which you regret....Nice poem....take care and keep smiling...

Hey
this is really good......the path of life is indeed very long....the road is neva ending......5/5 this can reflect many readers....

lots of love
sonam
:)

Now thats dark yaar..

The desire of love is still asleep in my heart
But the memories are wide awake, the memories of when everyone departs
Fighting till the last drop of blood can shed
I've finally lost this war, also losing my every bit of red

i just loved this part a lot..spl the first two lines.. u r simply the best here.

take care and all the best
5/5

Great!!!!!!
it has so much of depth and full of feelings........
excellent!!!!

keep up the gud work dear!

Bharti

That is very deep poem , ur sadness refects beautifully.
But stay strong , life has much beautiful to offer .