One Day

by Hareem   Jan 30, 2006


One day a time will be
In your hand, my hand will be
Thence all my dolour will efface
In my eyes will be your shining face
My long searched for destiny
I will embrace

I know not where you are
In my heart and yet so far
Of reaching you I'll find ways
Though, it's chimerical the world says
With you I see none on par
To have your love, my soul prays

Outright, all the hurdles I'll break through
To the hilt, I'll have you as my due
This must be love, now I construe
Yes, in nature's law the faith remains in situ
My sweetest dream shall come true
One day.....I'll be with you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I'll have to agree about the flow but other then that I'll have to saw WOW. Amazing that you don't have more votes on this. One of the best I've seen on the site so far. Hope you don't mind me trying to be as good as that. You're an excellent poet.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    This is really good. But I think the flow of some lines sent me off track. Because as Gretchen was, I was confused by some of the lines, they seemed like they didn't belong.

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Wow.. Your an amazing poet.. This sounds like it really came from the heart.. Keep up the great work hun...
    !^I love being in love^!

  • 18 years ago

    by Gretchen

    I was confused by some of the lines I dont know it could be just me.

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Nice poem... some of the rhymes are a smidge forced but it still seems to flow...nice job

    sammie

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