Nice poem... some of the rhymes are a smidge forced but it still seems to flow...nice job

sammie

I was confused by some of the lines I dont know it could be just me.

Wow.. Your an amazing poet.. This sounds like it really came from the heart.. Keep up the great work hun...
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This is really good. But I think the flow of some lines sent me off track. Because as Gretchen was, I was confused by some of the lines, they seemed like they didn't belong.

I'll have to agree about the flow but other then that I'll have to saw WOW. Amazing that you don't have more votes on this. One of the best I've seen on the site so far. Hope you don't mind me trying to be as good as that. You're an excellent poet.