60 pills

by Alyssia L K   Jan 30, 2006


I'm hardly ever happy, but no one can see that.

To everyone, I'm happy and enjoy life.

But that was only when I was younger.

Since I've gotten older, I became unhappy with my life.

Years and years, it's gotten worse.

So I've decided to end my life and all the pain I've suffered.

I'm ending it with 60 pills, that should do the trick.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Well it is a topic that can be really powerful, and you seem to have a lot to say about it, but I don't feel the pains of suicide in this poem. I mean, it is a very heavy subject and you are almost being light about it, so I don't feel the poem as much. Please don't be offended, I am not trying to insult you, just giving a suggestion. Best of luck hunni!

    -Tainted Mikochan

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