Holy shyte...you always amaze me...the way you word your poems and put them together...its just so...poetic...haha i know but like...yourcrazy good...you shoudl try to get published

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Unbelievably well written :) poetically well structured! ITs been so long since myl ast visits to this site, even my 3 newest songs have been waiting months ot be thrown on here. You've defitnitly caught my reborn attention.

Very dark and crawling. a good read

your servant:
david

This poem has to be one of my favorites. It's dark and tells a huge story behind it. Every line to me was captivating. I give this a 5/5. Good choice of words...

Very dark, tells a great story, amazing read, great write!

This piece is unique and superbly written. It's very descriptive.
Really good poem, it deserves 5/5.