Interesting poem. At first I didn't get it, I had to read it over a few times. Maybe you could write an explaination a the bottom so others can get it better, nice job though.

-Tainted Mikochan

Another sad poem but it was still good.5/5

I really really like this, it's deep and mysterious, though I don't completely understand it..

lol

keep writing, well done!

lonelynow xoxoxox

Great poem but a few typos:D
lol anyways greatwrite keep it up :D
5/5
lovelove
Alice
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Thanks for the comment =)
This poem is great!
The image it shows is a very emotional one- and is written well
5/5
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