You lied

by Lauren   Jan 30, 2006


We were so strong.
NOTHING could come between us.
then, SHE comes along.
and look where that got us.
how could she break us up?
i thought we were stronger than this!
i thought we could get through anything.
you said you'd always be there for me.
you said you'd never hurt me.
you said you'd never leave me.
but guess what baby,
you LIED.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Haley

    I know how you feel. I was in a similiar situation except for I was best friends with a guy and we had feelings for each other just not at the same time and a girl came and took him away from me and we were still real good friends and he'd tell me anything but then that stopped because his gf told him to choose between me and her and he chose her and left me heart broken! But all of your poems are really good! I can relate to most of them!

  • 18 years ago

    by Dan Bloom

    Intennnsseeee stuff right ther o jeez...yea now i feel like a fricken jerk...but i got lied to a bit just not like that i guess ohhh well dude i love the poem...i cant believe you call me a great writer cuz thats bull when you read yours then read one of mine...jeez 5/5!!

  • 18 years ago

    by A Bnormal

    It's really funny how a chick that he swore to you was just his friend messed up your whole relationship, cuz the same thing happened to me. Worst part is, the chick in mi case was mi best friend. Girls are b**ches and guys are liars and the sooner you realize that, the better off you'll be.

  • 18 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    This Is Such A Gr8 Poem!! The Ending Was Very Strong And I Luved It! Keep On Writting!!!
    Luv,
    *LuvYou2Death*

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