Great poem..perfect wording..my suggestion just make it longer..it would really help it out..but i still give it a 5
ttyl sometime
nice work keep it up
PeAcE
~The Poet~

I think it's wonderful as is. Very nicely done, Lissa!

THAT IS HANDS DOWN THE BEST POEM I HAVE EVER SAAWW YOU WROTE
THAT WAS JUUUUST AMMMAAAZZING
WHOOOOOOOAAAAA
9999/5
excellent
PeAcE
~The Poet~

I voted and commented a poem down there in your list..i wanted to tell u so u dont think i didnt comment back..so scroll down and look

Your love for this guy is blatantly obvious...all of your love poems are so filled with your feelings for him...its awesome haha. its so good to see other people who write about the people they love like this. how old are you, and how long have you been writing? youre definitely better than me at writing poetry