Blessing United

by Lu   Jan 30, 2006


She silently sat staring into the unknown
searching deep for answers
clutching the ache within her chest
as spasms after spasm of coughing
grasps her , life slipping away

Her eyes dark and sunken
pale skin now replaces
a face that once held beauty
yet a faint smile can be seen
upon lips touched with pain

Deep, deep into the depths
of her daughter's sea blue eyes
eyes that hold youth and vitality
she sees something ,long forgotten
a piece of her, a reflection of herself

Her breathing becomes rapid
lungs struggling for every breath
she touches the sweet soft cheek
of her darling child,her blood
whispering a faint I love you

Slowly her breathing becomes shallow
a single tear trickles from her eye
her questions answered
life and love ,given and received
serenity fills her soul

Peaceful sleep blesses her
she quietly slips away,knowing
within the heart of her daughter
and those that will follow
she will live on forever,in a reflection

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  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Luanne,

    I am speechless and don't know what to say. This was so beautifully written, exceptional.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Wow i dunno wat to say, this is just so good...

    ::MELI::

  • 18 years ago

    by CrAzY GiRl

    Good poem 5/5 love crazy xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Sad Luanne but written so beautiful. I'm trying to catch up on reading today. I've missed out on so many since Dad has been sick...beautifully penned.

    love ya, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by ..::José.e||

    Wow! i Llove your poem, its so sad, but very well done, theres so much emotion into it! two thumbs up! Keep it up!