by Princess09 Jan 31, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
You say you don't care, |
by Sole
Nice poetry. This flowed really well, the only small hitch is the second to last stanza, where you repeat 'that', it ruins the flow a little. Apart from this, awesome poem, I really liked the rhymes and the flow. Overall great work. |
by Tara Kay
100% perfect, i loved every line, it was so sad, so sweet, so emotional and i can relate to it well. keep writing, you have so much talent |
by Robert
This is a poem that a lot of ppl can relate to. thats what i like in it. i guess ppl learn by their mistakes, so there is truth in it too.. good job mate |
by Kaylee
Aww really sad but beautifully written. I loved how you know the things no other girl would probably know about him. |
by Allison
I don't usually like love poems but this one was awsome. Keep up the good work. You are a very talented poet. *5/5* |