Deep and meaningful message displayed through an immaculate piece of art. This is breathtaking, truly eye opening.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Powerful message within your words.... a sad yet beautiful write.

Great poem....so amazing and wonderful! I just would like to thank you for your sweet comment on my last poem. Coming from a great poet like you, it truly means a lot. Take care.

Wow, this is amazing! I love the last stanza, excellent write! WOW!

Luanne,

This was such a sad piece, but it was such an incredibly creative piece of writing.

Warmest regards,

Steve

Such a good poem. It is sad
~neens~

Sad write, Luanne. beautifully written.

love ya, Ann

Good poem 5/5 love crazy xoxox

So sad... but so beautiful...Gr8 Job!!!

~!xoxoxo!~

::MELI::

Wow. A great poem. The point of view you wrote the poem really adds to it. I also really liked your descriptions, and explainations of her reasoning. All in all an excellent poem. I am looking forward to reading more of your poems!

-Tainted Mikochan