by uNfOrGiVeNsiN335 Jan 31, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
You say these things. |
by aaron c s
That was a very sweet poem! you might want to write a poem with stanzas in it so the reader sees the difference in parts of the poem. also, you dont have to rhymeon everyline. it makes it seem forced and it messes up the flow. i liked the feeling behind it though. |