Dying...love

by XnotaprettygirlX   Jan 31, 2006


Im dreaming of you
im thinking of you
every night and day
i hope love will find a way
but i see you with her again
do you even remember my name?
do i even exist in your world?
will i ever be your girl?
for just a second a minute a day
can i just be yours babe?
i can't feel your touch
it hurts so much
but that's the price of dreaming
that's the price of loving you baby
i'm dying in the fading face of love
im waiting for my man from above
it seems you know my name
but it's not the same
friendship is not enough
cause im dying in the fading face of love!

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Stacey

    Hey,

    I loved this poem, especially the ending, it was really effecive :D

    However it got a little clumsy in the part that reads:
    ________________________________
    but i see you with her again
    do you even remember my name?
    do i even exist in your world?
    will i ever be your girl?
    for just a second a minute a day
    can i just be yours babe?
    _________________________________

    rest of it was great tho. kepp up the good work! 4/5

More Poems By XnotaprettygirlX