Hey,

I loved this poem, especially the ending, it was really effecive :D

However it got a little clumsy in the part that reads:
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but i see you with her again
do you even remember my name?
do i even exist in your world?
will i ever be your girl?
for just a second a minute a day
can i just be yours babe?
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rest of it was great tho. kepp up the good work! 4/5