Awwww this is really sad.
i have a poem for my dad as im goin through someting a little bit similar.

chin up hun.
love jess XxXxXX

I can totally relate to your poem, my father is quite the same, he acts as though I'm a failure in his eyes and it truely breaks me up inside.
Your poem was heart felt, meaningful and in a sense beautiful!

I dunno what to say - it's a brilliant poem... but i am truly sorry about the topic, no one deserves that. keep writing 5/5 =)

Thanks for the comment on my poem it is ture but it hard to tell the people you loved those kinds of things b/c they would't listen well in my case that is and also i am sorry about youre dad it too bad but comment me anytime i will comment you back Comment back-Liz

That is how my dad is to... It sux... I love the poem... Keep up the good work... and try not to let him get to you... cause that has really bad consequenses...

Dont worry i feel ur pain my mom drinks a lot 2 and my dad is just not here!! if u wanna talk iam here! kay

This is really well written!! I have a friend who's father is the same way so I can sympathize with you! Keeping writing down your emotions, it cleanses the soul :) Great Job!

I really undrestand what yay sayin i put that i n my favorites..

Aww such a good poem, i can realte to it too hunni keep writing x x x

Wow, i really loved your poem
it made me cry !_!
thats the exact same way for my father
except he doesn't drink
he just stays home
and does nothing
and still doesnt even treat me like im his daughter

he walks as if im not of his existance

Aww... I am really sorry, If you want I can share my dad! I am really sorry, I am glad that my dad isn't like that anymore. Ever sence I was born my dad has stoped drinking! But I am really sorry! Great Poem by the way!

This is great! i cant say i really relate to it, the way i have been treated my dad has killed all my emtional ties to him, has been that way for awhile.
but u r really talented and i am so sorry that he has been putting you thru this!

Be strong...
great poem.

That is just like my dad .....good poem.....this made me cry....5/5

Oh my goodness, thats so sad im sorry.
I thought i wasnt close with my dad, but i guess i am.