Awe...gosh Emma!! its soooo sad!! awe but soo good..i hope you're okay. I'm here if you wanna talk..=) 5/5 excellent poem.

This is incredibly sad. Your words are so deep and powerful, Emma dear. The secrets to how you write so wonderfully I'm sure the world will never know.

Awww this is sad -but i like it good job!

That poem is Fuxing amazing. I...I hate you. i have no word to decribe how much i needed to read a poem like that and you did it, you... Thankyou -hugs- well done poem Hunny!!!! keep it up and stay strong

Love you
Jenn
PS: if that made no sense sorry i havent slept in about 4-6 days

This poem is amazing...i really really llike it.....keep it up girl.....u are so good at it....peace nikki

AWW HUN THIS WAS SO GREAT HUN, REALLY GOOD, KEEP WRITTING, XOXO RACH

You're so talented...I know that I say it on like every poem but seriously, I cannot get over how great you are as a writer!...This poem is excellent; one of your best...I must say though that my favourite is probably the one that's like "lets take a trip through the doors of my mind, let's see what horrors we'll find" (I know the whole thing off by heart I love it that much!)...I think that was the first of your poems that I read...I think, not sure...Yeah, the whole stopping thing is easing off lately (maybe because I'm having a better week) but maybe becuase I'm getting used to not doing it...I told my 23 year old sister about it and she told me that she's stopping purging (she was bulimic) so it's good because we're going through it together...My friends are great with it...I'm also lucky to have people like you, strangers who I've never met, who tell me how great it is and give me so much support; I couldn't thank you enough!

Emma you sound really upset. Ur poem rhymes well and it flows nicely xx

I never said u were an angel. And the line about ur hed being ringed with thorns....luv...kinda sounds like u r comparin urself to the big J, which is a bit ummm... bigheaded. Ive said ths a few times 2 a few peeps, yeh, and how come u get to b an angel? ? ? ? All the wrds go nice and stuff, yeh, but dontchoo eva write abt nice stuff? dontchoo eva write abt ur frends (im assuming u hav sum) dontchoo eva wonda hw ur makin dem feel? Its a bang up poem, yeh, dont get me wrong, but wha's with all the angels and morbidity?

Love this poem! Very sad and deep but also beautiful in its own way!

Wow! excellent poem, very deep and moving. it flows absolutely flawlessly. truly magnificent. keep it up.

xXx

Emma that's beautiful, actually, truly stunningly beautiful. I just want to cry, I know how you feel unfortunately.
luv Helen xxx

Thanku to all of u who wrote such kind comments, they mean so much to me, and i really appreciate the support. keep writing guys :)
take care,
lots of luv xxxxxx

I love you Emma, you're so nice to me!! I love this poem too, definitely one of my favourites!
Luv Helen xxx

Absolutely wonderful piece! i hope you continue to write! i have nothing at all bad to say except maybe change the "were" in the last line to are or you're cause it suddenly changed to the past tense. other than that its absolutely perfectly wrtten and flowed very well. keep writing and stay safe, strong, and healthy!
*AntiSocial16*
ps: thanks for the comment on my "Trapped Angel" piece, i truly appreciated it!

Wow, this was an awesome poem! I loved it. It was so sad, and ive been reading some of your poems and you have a lot of talent. It defenately deserves a 5/5. Just stay strong.
~*Kalynn*~

Very sad,I liked this poem so much
you know how to express your feelings into a very meaningful poetry..
5/5
smile :)

This is by far one of my favorites on this site that I have read. It's amazing every word of it. Keep writing and take care.

With love,

*> : PainOfOne - blaine

Thanku everyone! :) xxx

Wow
this is a wonderful poem
you never cease to amaze me
the imagery was so powerful

**i would also like to thank you for the lovely comment you left me on my poem "broken angel", you are such a nice person! thank you again!