Murderer

Violent poem
Short. Nice choice of words.
Beautiful.
5/5
~Stevie

**clears thoart**
sorta creepy

Short n dark. I like it. Also I liked how you put the 3 words in the beginning really spells it all out for you doesn't it?
Great Job
5/5

WoW that was very interested, sill 5/5

I felt that the poem was too lacking in descriptive imagery to make up for its lack of length. A short poem needs to be both concise and profound, which is why so many poems are of average length. This poem was most certainly concise, but the descriptions it lacked are where the power of the message would have come through.