Comments : To the one I love.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Great *thumbs up*

  • 18 years ago

    by InDePeNdEnT AnD BeAuTiFuL

    Great one Jake. i like it alot. its a bit long but its really good one. keep it up. i enjoyed reading it very much.

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥Leah♥

    Omg, this made me cry. it was soooo good. it doesnt even matter that it was so long, it made it even better. i loved it. 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by rar

    Hey this is a very good poem good job

  • 18 years ago

    by catherine

    I am jealous of whoever you are writing this to, because it is incredibly moving. You're hard work payed of, congrats.
    CATHEY

  • 18 years ago

    by Cheech

    I like the emotion of your writing. you got lots of potential.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jonathan Blair

    Nice, dangg... that was pretty amazing.. Long but good... check mine outt too!

    gave yours a 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan Raff

    Very nice, was a pleasure to read.

  • 17 years ago

    by the simple girl

    Wow, this is an amazing poem, your usage of words is extrodinary. I really live the stanze,

    Its your love.
    That consumes my brain.
    Its your love.
    That drives me insane

    It just has a really good flow to it. I love your poetry, you have a true talent.
    ---Ashley

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    Very movin peice of literature. Whoever this was written about is some lucky person. Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Renan

    Amazingly done!

    Beautfull and very well done poem!

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by precious

    I like this poem this poem is like the relationship im in its a good poem

  • 15 years ago

    by Mrs6Squarepants

    Love it , couldn't be any better
    yu have talent .!