"Will there be someone new?
A fresh and wonderful start?"

Bill,
This poem was really sad, it made me
cry... don't know why, but it did. The
lines above really touched my heart.
I guess because I asked myself this
question before... I love your poem, It
was truly amazing and great.

Well done my friend! Take care, hugs!

Oh Bill, this is so sad! So beautifully written, though..

"will forever remember the date
Goodbye to the woman who said "for life"

Those lines are amazing! Awesome poem!

"My Heart Sings", this poem is simply breathtaking. The last line is powerful, love it!

This is beyond incredible. Life has a way of playing hardball. But don't worry. You'll come out victorious.

Once again you've capture the essence of lost love. Great job!

Bill ,
Such a sad,sad piece .It really does hurt my heart for my dear friend to feel so much sadness.

None of ever knows what tomorrow holds , but what I do know in my heart is : that there is someone for everyone .
Your someone will find you Bill ,keep your heart open......

Wonderfully written poem Bill , that would even make the "Mona Lisa" herself shed a tear .

So sad, so beautiful. You are incrediblely talented, I love your poems. They always are filled with such emotion, simply lovely. Too often forever falls to pieces.
Keep smiling, Keep laughing,
Kim

A disposable society we live in
No such thing as forever
No one can win
Nothing stays together

the pain beneath these words really took my breath away..

I do hope putting down these words has in some small way wipe out the pain.

take care Bill. Nothing - definitely not the bad.

good luck and peace
shobhana

A beautiful summary of love, gained and lost. It is hell, and in the end there is nothing you can do. I have to wait, which is just as painful and then there are things, places that constantly remind you of the one you lost. It is not fun and you illistrated it beautifully in your poem. Nice job, really expressive and a 5/5 from me!

-Tainted Mikochan

I love that
Its beautiful
:)

Waw, a very true poem it is, even though we try to hide it. i love it very much and it sure makes u think for a long time, its a unforgatable poem and breathtaking as well, wish u all the best Bill, keep the good work up. :)

Wow!.that.was.amazing

This is so good Bill. You have real talent.... Keep it up 5/5

Mallori

A sad beautiful poem I pray hope and trust will come back into your heart, just tread carefully poet.