Kissing the Rain

by Mezmeryz   Jan 31, 2006


I was miserable and paining
And waiting for you, for sure
Thinking now that you'll be coming
We'll be together like before

Without doubt, you came
But with a misunderstanding
Throwing on me, the blame
Of someone elses planning

You gave no time to explain
Just turned and walked away
Leaving me in this anguish again
Once more; feelings going astray

Now I'm standing here
Within all the sorrow
Wishing there were another
Life I could borrow

But even then I wonder
If you would still do the same
Leaving me in this weather
Making me endure all the shame

That I dont really deserve
But you want me to feel
Threatening the immortal love;
You've brutally tried to kill

Drops are now drenching me
So I'm kissing the rain
For all I could wish it to be
Your forgiveness washing away the pain

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    I loved the last stanza of this poem, it was sooo beautiful! 10/5 (if i could...)

  • 18 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    Wow, that was beautiful. I loved every word. Excellent job, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    Hey mez!
    jus thot id tl u dat u did a gr8 job on da poem kasam it was awsome n if it was ritn frm hw i felt den lyk u sed den wow cos it was so acur8...u shud b wel hapy wid it, i lve it!
    tke cre
    xmwahx

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    I loved the last stanza, specially " Drops are now drenching me, So I'm kissing the rain"....
    beautifully done... i felt all the pain in this poem... but hey, that's what love is all about... keep writing hun... 5/5

    Much Love,
    Ipsita

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow. Loved this poem! Wonderful ending with "kissing the rain"very wonderful, and I could actually see you standing there feeling miserable and kissing the rain.

    Another powerful part was " I wish there was another life I could borrow" Very powerful.... Actually.. now that I come to think about it, I love every part of it. I think I should read it over again haha.

    WEll done sweety, also thank you for you comment, you should know it means a lot to me!

    Lotsaaa love -xxx-
    Keep up the good work!

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