Pain

A knock on my door
as no one replies
the door creeps open
feet rushing over to the bed
my body being shaked
from side to side
panicked voices i hear
as someone calls 911
minutes later
"she's dead"
says a paramedic
sobs leak across my room
these are the things i hear
as all my pain is released

this one isn't that good cause it only took a few minutes to write but please rate and comment anyway