AWW HUN THIS WAS GREAT, I LOVED, KEEP WRITTING YOUR AWESOME POEMS. XOXO RACH

AAAhhhhhhhhh....we are just too good to be TRUE! lol!!!

I KNOW WHERE YOU GOT YOUR INSPIRATION FROMM!!!! ;-)

Actually, though, my ballerina poem wasn't based off that song. It's actually pretty old, one of the poems that survived the fire, and I found it because my crazy grandma, which you will read all about in my next letter, wanted to have it. So i copied it down and gave her the real one.

BUT..anyways, LOVELY LOVELY POEM!!!!!!!! You're such an artist!!!! Its a reaaaaal song. I love how its like also a poem too....incredible, dearest!
LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!

As bruce almighty would say.........B-E-A-U-tiful!!!!!!!!!!!!! 5/5 wonderfully written, great job, keep it up

~chelsea~

Brilliant peice, the form works really well and the wroding is very effective.

5/5

Hm..very diffrent in my oppinion, none the less it was good, creative and unique.