Comments : Day Dreaming

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    *Beautiful Writing Bill, Welld Done*

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Satin, I work 100% commission...there is no company time...it is all my time. Thanks.

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    How beautiful! Eagles scare the heck out of me but they always seemed to have some majestic beauty..you captured it well. I love it! and you chose the perfect title.

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Wow great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Wow!!! that is wonderful Bill! If only life were to be that endless stretch of day dream after dream!
    i like the way you shook us back to rude reality - open my eyes, back to work I go.

    thanks for your comments on my work. I really feel motivated hearing from people like you!

    good luck and do keep writing!
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Bill, This is breathtaking! I especially love this stanza!

    "Are eagles really angels sent from high?
    Destined to lead the way
    It came to me, do not ask why
    Just something to think about today"

    Amazing write, absolutely beautiful!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    Wow, that's so perfect, dreamy, in fact. I'll never know how you do it! 5/5 and I wish they went higher!
    xxx Helen

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Oh the imagery just simply beautiful! Great write Bill :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Beautiful~*~Dragons~*~Fire

    Such a wonderful poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very, very nice Bill!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by rocker666chick

    Whoo I love this poem well yeah I just love it well later
    ~!N!GhT $T@R$ L!GhT!~