Hey!! great poem! i love the end line!
so true lol
take care love jess XxXxXx

I love this poem. I truely understand it. I do drugs so I understand the happiness, the everthing. This is my favorite part:
A drunken whiskey lake, a marijuana land
psychedelic mountains, and even acid sand
enchanted mushroom forest, an ecstasy-filled dance
crystal-meth infested caves, brings on a trippy trance
combination alley-way, horrid trips and visions
addicted to the presence, of all the ultimate sins
That whole section is very powerful! Great Job!!!
**Casey**

Awsome! sweet peom i like your writings they make me think lol love you *liss*