Wow, awesome job babe, it was perfect and I liked the fact that it came from your heart and you didnt try to sugar coat it. You said what needed to be said and how you felt! It was great and just so you know that I feel your pain, you can talk to me whenever you need. Much love and Be strong....for both of us. 5/5
Kalynn

Oh my gosh... hunni... I had no idea. ='( I hope you are okay... ugh I don't even know what to say right now. I am so sorry that you have gone through so much, and if you ever need to talk I'm here okay? I know it's hard right now, but I gurantee that one day you'll turn around and the love of your life is going to be standing there. I promise =) I love ya to death, and I hope you're okay. xoxo

WOW! I love this poem. I'm sorry for whatever you did have to go through with your x best friend. i hope you are ok. Very great poem though! Take Care.
xoxo
Megan

Coming from the heart . . . nice. Looks like your mind did a fair bit of work as well here though - the rhyming was well written, and the structure and flow actually worked really well together - another excellent write.

Peace. [Sole]