Comments : My Purpose

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    In the second stanza the rhyming seemed a little forced...other then that, no critiques from me. what an awesome write! I love the message this conveys...

    "But I kept on going not knowing why,
    Waiting for your reasons for what you've done,
    And you showed me the meaning of life,
    By giving me my beautiful son."

    ^that is true faith. how beautiful! this is one of the best reads all day. keep up the good work :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Wow great poem tim keep it up i love your writing

    great job

    love always
    tabby

  • 18 years ago

    by ~miSs~tEEnagE~pRinCeSs~

    Yes...don't question God ... just believe in Him..

  • 18 years ago

    by Cloe

    Wow Tim, this is a Great poem...
    I don't even know what to say, great job!
    When bad things happen, you have no choice but to continue living life...
    God choses each and every one of our fates, each of us has a purpose to live...
    This poem conveys a great message, great job on it..
    5/5 Take care!

    -Cloe

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~Morgan~*~

    Wow...=)...wonderful poem! keep up the good work, i enjoy reading it.