Ignore the Smoke

by Drew Gold   Jan 31, 2006


Absorbing warmth from the flame
the crowd gathers, shivering
unaware of their actions

glazed eyes dance, transfixed
following the candle's flicker
moths collide and fall helplessly

bodies move breathlessly;
drawn away from the center
conforming to fill their shapes

they've never acted so alive
feeling light; one breath and
their flame is dispelled

smoke hangs in the air, lazily
the isolation tastes warmer
cuddling their darkened forms

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    *You are a winner*

    This poem uses good literature and excellent visuals, but i'll be honest and say i have no idea what it's about. ah well, it was still a good read.

  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    Awsome i don't know what to say

    pili

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    I like this wonderful job

    love always
    tabby