by Bethan Jan 31, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
She loves him more than anyone else ever could, |
by *Charisma*
That was a wonderful poem! Loved it! Jpoet* |
by Dre4meR
Hey there...this was such a lovely poem...you show much emotions and sometimes while reading the reader can have a sense of feeling it too...amazing poem...:) |
by Charles
Nice peom bethan, serious i aint just saying that. written like a pro. ur the best thing that has happn'd to Brad since the mirror and me ofcourse. the poem was written with passion, emotion and truth most importanly. carry on the good work, cos ur good. |
by dora
Hey darl. l0t 0f em0ti0n in this piece. beautifully written a heartfelt piece. amazing j0b. thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk. it meant al0t t0 me!! |
by TinyDancer46
Wow... This is incredible!! Your rhyming pattern is perfect, and the love that you expressed was so beautiful. I loved the way that it turned out to be you in the end, and I wish you the best with you and that person. Keep up the awesome writing!! xoxo |