Free

by David Marshall   Jan 31, 2006


I've had enough, I can't take it anymore.

Don't be surprised if there's blood on the floor.

It feels like my heart has just got impaled.

I tried so many times, but obviously i failed.

That's it I'm through, give me a knife.

This time I mean it, I'm ending my life.

I thought for a minute and looked at the sky.

Maybe theres still hope. I don't have to die.

I cried for hours, what will I do.

I can't imagine ever replacing you.

I still got friends, and family.

After a while i started to see.

Besides, there's many years ahead of me.

I think I'll finally move on, so my soul can be free.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Excellent, wonderful poem! Your poetry is really superb because you have the ability to take a topic everyone writes about and make it so unique through your own words. Keep it up, I really enjoying your writings. 5/5 xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    That is such an amazing poem and really sends out a powerful message. I love the way that you ended it. Great job on this. The flow & the rhythm really held up well.. great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Arnold

    Thats really really great!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by *~vixen~*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Daze

    Wow, great poem, i really like the ending, and how he decides not ot do, different end form a lot of suicidal poems i've read, gives hope and a desire to live, well 5/5 good poem

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