Wow thats so sweet and incrediable, ur a great writer

Wow thats so sweet and incrediable, ur a great writer

Wow thats so sweet and incrediable, ur a great writer

Wow, great poem, i really like the ending, and how he decides not ot do, different end form a lot of suicidal poems i've read, gives hope and a desire to live, well 5/5 good poem

I give this one a 5 of 5, keep on going.

Thats really really great!!!

That is such an amazing poem and really sends out a powerful message. I love the way that you ended it. Great job on this. The flow & the rhythm really held up well.. great job!

Excellent, wonderful poem! Your poetry is really superb because you have the ability to take a topic everyone writes about and make it so unique through your own words. Keep it up, I really enjoying your writings. 5/5 xxx