3:41 A.M My last Goodbye.

by \\.Razor-Blade Romance.//   Jan 31, 2006


I stand on this ledge
ready to fall
my heart is beating
this is it after all
so i take one step forward
and descend towards the ground
my vision becomes blurred
i close my eyes and say goodbye
then i hit the ground
sounds of sudden distant cries
as the people surround
everyone wonders why
with blood all around
and puddles of tears
everyone left confound
to what they had just seen here.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    Its very sad, but creative, i think uve done a good job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Not goodbye, hello, hello to the world, to me. Hello, hello, hello. You are only 14 baby, you have so many years ahead of you, and you only get to live this life once, don't waste that chance. I have a poem that might help you a bit. *see poem* Suicide through someone else's eyes. Huggles baby!

    -Tainted Mikochan

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