My Dreamguy

by valentina   Feb 1, 2006


It was a very happy month of May
As the sun shines on its lucky day
Then, this dream guy came my way
That causes my world to stay...

I don't know what's within him
That my world stop revolving
without him
All I know is that I'm dim
Standing and thinking like a steam.

Time has pass but still I'm here
Realizing the fact that set me here
Then one day you came,
and ask my name
How lucky I am,
just like winning the game.

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  • 18 years ago

    by BlackRoses14

    I thought it was good, but is some cases, I didn't really connect with the poem. But over all, it really was very well done! Good Job! Keep it up!