Heh! WOW This was very short, lol I am not kidding, I have a problem with short poems , they leave me in the dark. Also, this ending is AHEJWHEIJWIEJIWJ yeah, that basically, lol, sorry I don't like the ending, it's a little weak once againm, great format though.

I can't really say I have a favorite part, all the lines are pretty good.

Keep up the good work and always strive to do better.

Thank you for sharing this poem.

I dunno with Mike i think this ending suits the poem =s, either way your a great poet and got a lot of talent in yeah, keep it up:)

Jenn