How abt.."Who Is Me"?? .. :o)
Hey, i really liked this one..spl

The weight of the world,
On my shoulders, I carry this stress,
It's weighing me down,
I'm a beautiful mess.

this is really another side of urs which i am amazed to see...i really m. Even i m wondering if i know u anymore or do we hv to start from scratch?

nicely written dear
all the best and take care

Awww... that is a sad poem. Very heartfelt. I felt your pain in every line. When you make other readers feel your pain, that's when you know you are a good writer. And that's how I know that you are an awsome writer. Keep it up.

Luv
Michelle

Gr8.......very effective,,,,,,,,touching as well.......loved the last stanza....5/5

luv,
Bharti