Comments : Melodies of Life

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Mike,

    This is a sweet poem, and if my assuption is correct, everythings gonna be fine, -will talk to you about this subject later=)- Poem wise:

    I HATE YOU! lol its prefect, its loving and deep, diction and flow are ace as usual, I loved the first stanza,

    I had been traveling without a destination,
    I continued to crack the mystery, with out any clues,
    Making the memories you gave to me,
    Into a song to heal my pain.

    keep it up hunny

    Love
    Jenn