That was awesome!!! I totally agree after you find out someone has told you a lie you question everything they say from then on. Always wondering in the back of your head. Good job at expressing that

Great poem you are awesome i love it!!!

love always tabby

Its was a goodone bj. i dun like doin long comments cuz i never know wot to say. ghehehe. well the rhymesheme wos cool. it was steady tho. well i loved it gave it 5. soo yea. hugs and kisses me.

Filled with emotion,awesome job of expressing your feelings.5/5
Tisha~

Omg thats so great...7/5..
wow u make some pretty good poem..
Wut uve said is true..but be aware of ur lie too..Well its all up to you but
dont get mad cuz of one lie...

Keep up ur good work..
alex

Honey Bj!!!!
i loved it it was great im commenting and i read it and rated it
so return the fav. love you lots
tessibeth

I Loved it, BJ. It's excellent. Love ya,
~Shortness~