Beautiful poem. It hit home with me as I kept people at arms length my entire life. It wasn't until a year ago I let people in. I had never experienced what letting people become close can bring...the love and pain. I bid you, let the world in. It is worth it.

Sorry about the sidebar....great poem. I found the flow very good, but would change one thing, the periods at the end of sentences....when read, there is a natural pause there and the reader will find it. Great job. I love your poetry and insight. Keep writing, it makes a difference to the world.

I kno the feeling. open up to someone tho. i cant imagine not having someone to talk to. thx for the comment. i loved the poem. grrt job....

Well done on this one cuddles! your description and the way you've ended this poem are simply wonderful!

keep up the grat work!
love and luck
shobhana

WOW, this is so beautifully conveyed! So sad, but I can see part of myself in this! Amazing poem, excellent writing!

Great poem, so sad yet beautiful. Excellent work. Congrats on making the front page. 5/5 :-)

Great poem!! 5/5/5

Hi... Well first of all, thank you for your comments on my poem. It was really appreciated. I love you poems, when I read them i can see the whole situation coming live in front of my eyes, and thats a great quality to have in a poet. So, awsome job on each and every one of them. :-)

Secondly, I congratulated you for making the front page meaning this poem of yours was on the top rated poem page. So congrats once again.

Love and best wishes
Michelle

Pretty good pretty good but the ending needs to be a little stronger. I do the same thing but still you did a good job. It was really interesting and from the heart.
Nichole Renee