Very good poem, i liked the first stanza, very powerful opening to the poem, great write!
5/5

Brillent!! The first line is amazing and is a great opening for the poem.

Wow. this was amazing! I believe this is one of my favorites of yours! There is nothing about this poem I would change; it's so marvelous! great job & keep writing! 5/5

This poem was great it had me from beginning to end i loved it great job 5/5