This was such a true poem, beyond what cheesy crap i could say... I'm straight forward with you, it's true.

And Well thank you,

Just being me

-Carl

That I'll start up on my own
Not like I'm completely helpless but
Sometimes I just need to fight it alone

These lines really captured my attention and I thought for a while....yeah thats so true and it is one of the reasons to live.

Well penned and very well worded. Your poem is great with both lexical and poetic quality.

Rating: I would give you 5/5 :)

Plse chk out my latest.

Thanks a bunch
Fsams