Wow i love it. i hate putting one liners but thats about all i can say. I like it i really do

Very nice poem, and good luck in the guard. You live the way I do. People need to learn they have to face this world no matter how much pain or sorrow they feel. Congrats on seeing past your past.

Hey that really cool poem!
Well done its great!
Thanks for my comment
Kyliexx

Yeah nice nice... now concerning the latest comment you wrote on one of my poems:

in fact i still am writing but i somehow stopped posting stuff here... if you wanna read my newest poems, go on my blog geegz.blogsome.com ... as soon as i create a new poem, i post it there... now have fun and keep commenting...