Very good and its good since you just wrote it...anyways, i need to write more...laterz..

Matt

Wow Robert this is really good...Im sorry if ur heart was broken..remember i am here for you if u ever wanna talk....I could feel the emotion and i find it beautiful yet sad..Great Job...Your Friend Joclyn

So i'm guess you wrote this one for me so hey i hear you loud and clear i'll back off

That was a really good poem I liked it alot keep up the good work 5/5

All my every moves? (in the first verse. lol) lay
-flava-

~*WoW ur a really great writer i love ur stuff, well keep it up*~ XoXo